What you have written is clear, so, mostly well done. You speak of homes and businessES. Both should be plural, more than one, since you speak of homes. You could also say A home or A business and it would mean the same. You also need a comma after "businesses". It's a compound sentence, with the connecting "and", so a comma is required, "businesses, and...". You could also make it two sentences: "....homes or businesses. It can be tangible or intangible."
I also advise a comma in the series "...ownership, possession, and transferability of things..." (no comma after "transferability". And, note, I wrote "OF things", not "OVER things".
'Property law is an area of law that enforces rights of ownership, possession and transferability, over things , may it be, public property (government owned), private property such as homes or business and it can be tangible or intangabile.'
my first language isnt english, so my writing skills is poor , so i would apprecaite some help on fixing that.
thanks
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My advice is to keep sentences short. They are much more to the point, and readable. They engage the readers thinking.
When you write complex and long sentences, with commas, and such, it takes away, I think, from the point your are making, and when you make it a compound sentence you often lose the reader, whether with home or business communications. You are safer with to the point short sentences.
When you write complex and long sentences, with commas, and such, it takes away, I think, from the point your are making, and when you make it a compound sentence you often lose the reader, whether with home or business communications. You are safer with to the point short sentences.
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