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Question

Directions: Answer the following questions in 2 separate paragraphs. (revised)

1. Why is the cost of health care an important factor?

The cost of health care is an important factor because it keeps getting more expensive which in turn will have an impact on access. The higher the cost of health care becomes less individuals can afford it. Some of the factors that play a role in the cost of health care include the following higher insurance premiums, individuals with chronic diseases, increasing the cost of medical services and end of life care. Additionally, it is harder for people to get preventive care and screenings.

2. How you would address/alter to further improve the cost of the healthcare system?

The way that I would address the issues regarding the cost of health care is by making it more affordable for individuals to get health insurance and lower the cost of insurance premiums.