Please check grammar correctint comma splice sentences and need to use more the 1 method.
Original sentence: Unfortunately Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote,she died in 1906.
My corrected sentence:
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote, because she died in 1906.
Thank you in advance for your assists.
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Your correction is good. What other method are you going to use?
The following two:
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote. She died in 1906.
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote, because she died in 1906.
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote. She died in 1906.
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote, because she died in 1906.
I'd add a comma after "Amendment" in each sentence.
Other than that, they're just fine! Nice!
Other than that, they're just fine! Nice!
Thank you for your help
You're very welcome.
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