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I had to correct the following fragment sentence error. Please advice if they are correct. Thank you in advance for your help. 1. It is true that the first drive-in theaters opened in New Jersey in 1933, which was in the middle of the Great Depression whe...

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Please check grammar correctint comma splice sentences and need to use more the 1 method. Original sentence: Unfortunately Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote,she died in 1906. My correct...

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ndicate whether a sentence is a run-on or correct. If the sentence is a run-on, correct it using your knowledge of coordination and subordination. 1. My mother is very politically conservative; she’s written in King George III for president in the last tw...

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Whatis Pronoun antecedent agreement?

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Had to correct sentences so the parallel ideas are expressed 1. Is it true that Superman could leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive, and those bullets would bounce off his skin? 2. To celebrate the canned pork product called Spam, we attended...

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Is this a good thesis for my research paper. Although gays are deprived of same-sex marriage, they are stripped of their respect,equal rights and financial security; therefore, the Federal government must pass a law allowing same-sex marriages

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I am writing a persuasive essay on Gay Marriage. Wondering I have a couple titles and would like your opinion which you thinks sounds the best Here are a couple title Marriage: The Right for All Marriage: A Union Between Two

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Three fifths of the tshirts in a tshirt shop are blue. Five eighths are those tshirts are on sale. One third of the blue tshirts that are on sale are size medium. What fraction of the shops tshirts are blue tshirts that are on sale and are size medium. Ex...

7 years ago

in a science experiment sarah recorded temperatures of -42 Celsius and 2.4 Celsius. Which of the temperatures in degrees celsius is less than both of the temperatures mari recorded what is the answer

4 years ago

I had to correct each sentence using "It is true that" test, identify the fragment and complete sentences. Hope this is helpful So with that said is 5 incorrect. Thank you again for your help.

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5. It is true that other outdoors summer activities are also endangered, for instance the miniature golf industry down from 50,000 courses in the 1930s to fewer than 15,000 today. Is it correct now

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Thank you for your assistence very much appreciated.

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The following two: Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote. She died in 1906. Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving wom...

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Thank you for your help

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correcdted 1. My mother is very politically conservative, but she’s written in King George III for president in the last two elections. 2. Mary Lou decided not to eat the alphabet soup, because the letters spelled out “botulism.” 3. A dried gourd containi...

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Are these better 1. My mother is very politically conservative, for she’s written in King George III for president in the last two elections. 2. Mary Lou decided not to eat the alphabet soup because the letters spelled out “botulism.” 3. A dried gourd con...

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Writing an essay on advertisement. If you wouldn't wear your dog, Please don't wear any fur. Is the following a good thesis. (This is only my 3 essay not to sure how) Animals were put on this earth just like humans, so that they can live their lives, just...

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Animals were put on this earth just like humans, so that they can live their lives, just like we do.

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is this a better theseis? Humans have nocompassion for suffering of animals for cosmetic uses, Animals kill to eat and have no other choice, we kill to satisfy our selfish needs.

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I have rewritten my thesis. how is it now Although people wouldn’t wear their dogs, for the desire to appear fashionable, many animals are killed, and therefore we must not wear any fur.

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I corrected sentence #1 is this correct 1.It is true that Superman could leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive, and those bullets could bounce off his skin.

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Wow this is much harder than I thought. Thank you for your help.

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correct 1 again 1. Is it true that Superman could run faster than a speeding bullet, more powerful than a locomotive and able to leap tall buildings in a single bound?

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here is the original sentence and by correcttion. Is it true that Superman could leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive, and that bullets would bouce off his skin? Is it true that Superman could leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive...

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here is the original sentence and by correcttion. Is it true that Superman could leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive, and that bullets would bouce off his skin? Is it true that Superman could leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive...

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here is the original sentence and by correcttion. Is it true that Superman could leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive, and that bullets would bouce off his skin? Is it true that Superman could leap tall building, run faster than a locomotive...

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Final correction Is it true that Superman could leap tall building, run faster than a locomotive and that bullet could bounce off his skin?

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Thank you I will continue to work on thesis post my results later

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Although gays are equal members of society, they are stripped of their respect,equal rights and financial security; therefore, the Federal government must pass a law allowing same-sex marriages

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I have made changes to my thesis as follows: Although gays are equal members of society, they are stripped of their respect,equal rights and financial security; therefore, the Federal government must pass a law allowing same-sex marriages thank you in adv...

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Guess no one agrees since no comment has been added

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That makes three vote, because that is the one I like the best Thank you both

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question Is it fine to have a colon after Marriage and to you think I need to add another word after two?

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