"medicine" (Sp)
"Retrieve" means to get back. Was the medicine taken away from her previously?
A thesis sentence is just that — one sentence. You have several. Can you compress to one sentence?
Phoenix Jackson is Eudora Welty's major character in the short story, "A Worn Path." She is a very old and fragile, African American woman struggling against herself and nature to retrieve medice for her sickly grandson. Throughout the story, Phoenix encounters many hardships and trials that hinder her from accomplishing her task, but her everlasting love for her grandson pushes her to overcome these hinderances. Phoenix Jackson's character is determined by her strength of love for her only grandson...
What more things should I add to my thesis sentence? Is there anything wrong with the first few sentences? Thanks!
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