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ok. how's this so far for an outline:

1. vacation spots - broad subject
2. Asheville, North Carolina - limited topic for thesis statement
3. Asheville is a fun and relaxing place to visit - Main Idwa about This Topic
4. -river, -picnic spots, -ice-cream parlor
- Three-Step Format for Thesis Statement
5. Asheville, North Carolina is a fun and relaxing place to visit because of it's refreshing river, beautiful picnic spots, and various ice-cream parlors.

so far so good?

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Nope....The thesis statement that MsSue suggested would be a good one. Or, choose three things that you particularly enjoy doing there. You might begin your essay by saying " Winter always brings memories of my favorite summer vacation area." Then go from there.
Asheville, North Carolina - topic for thesis statement
Asheville is a fun and relaxing place to visit -
Main Idwa about This Topic
-river, -picnic spots, -ice-cream parlor
- Three-Step Format for Thesis Statement
5. Asheville, North Carolina is a fun and relaxing place to visit because of it's refreshing river, beautiful picnic spots, and various ice-cream parlors.

This works out very well.
wait..so what i wrote is ok GurubLue?
because i don't think you guys understand what i have to do

if you're saying that Asheville is the broad topic, then i have to pick a narrower topic and find supports for THAT.

it will be easy for me to write the way i organized it..
Y -- do you want the easy way -- or the way you'll learn most, as suggested by two experienced English teachers?

Your choice!