odd question...
"I longingly gazed at my tan lined ring finger, and somehow knew: he’s proud."
i am trying to edit that sentance, does it make sense? As in does the grammar make it flow?
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It doesn't make any sense. What are you trying to say?
It is out of context. I actually makes sense in the story :P but does the "tan lined ring finger" make sense? I feel like they should have a "-" between them.... like "tan-lined" or "ring-finger"
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