Asked by Dawn

odd question...

"I longingly gazed at my tan lined ring finger, and somehow knew: he’s proud."

i am trying to edit that sentance, does it make sense? As in does the grammar make it flow?
Answered by Ms. Sue
It doesn't make any sense. What are you trying to say?

Answered by Dawn
It is out of context. I actually makes sense in the story :P but does the "tan lined ring finger" make sense? I feel like they should have a "-" between them.... like "tan-lined" or "ring-finger"
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