My thesis does respond to the prompt and is based on the text, but I think it could be clearer and more concise. A more straightforward thesis statement would help guide the reader better and make my argument easier to follow.

rephrase like a 8th grader

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My thesis does answer the prompt and is based on the text, but I think it could be clearer and simpler. A more direct thesis statement would help the reader understand better and make my argument easier to follow.