Ms. Sue here is the poem that I was working on yesterday. I added other things onto here; I am still working on my ending, but I need your help with one sentence.
The magic box
I will put in the box
Hugs and kisses from my family
The daylight brought from the sun and
My parent’s blessings
I will put in the box
The teardrop of my eye
The first smiles of my baby brothers
The classical music playing in my heart
I will put into the box
My cousin’s dimples
The cold breeze blowing in the air
And memories from the past
I will put in the box
the strongest force of love which I have gained and shared
the happiness brought out from the hearts and my mom’s lullaby sung to me as a baby
I will put in the box the passion, desire, and hope .............
the wonderful dreams experienced
the holy bible as a sign of god being with me and the honesty of the innocence
All your help wil be appreciated, thanks a lot:-)
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"the happiness brought out from the hearts and my mom’s lullaby sung to me as a baby"
I will put into the box
Every heart’s compassion for affection and the my mom's lullaby
Can you also help me with this sentence:
I will put in the box the passion, desire, and hope .............
And please tell me if everything else is okay. Thank you very much :-)
I will put in the box the passion, desire, and hope .............
I don't know how to end it.
I was thinking of something like this, but I don't know if it makes sense:
I will put in the box the mutual emotions of passion, desire, and hope?