Question

Is this thesis correct?
Even though, this novel has some difficult context to comprehend, it appeals to the readers through emotions and by being mysterious.

Answer 1

First, you don't need the first comma. It does not belong there.

Delete the first phrase about difficulty and you have a thesis statement. You can discuss the difficulty you had in reading the novel in the body of your commentary.

Answer 2

Is this better?
This novel appeals to the readers through emotions and by being mysterious.

Answer 3

Yes, that's better. Actually, whether you found it a difficult read or not has nothing to do with your thesis. I appreciate your perception, and I know it's real, but whether or not the novel is hard to understand or not depends entirely on the individual reader, not anything inherent in the novel itself. :)

Answer 4

THANK YOU.

Answer 5

You're welcome. Now, as I mentioned yesterday, make sure you explain what you mean by "mysterious." :)