is this sentence gram. correct?

For example, the genocide in Darfur shows not only history repeats itself when unacknowledged, but also progress is at a standstill if we refuse to resolve our conflicts.

should i have a THAT before the not only and after the shows?

6 answers

Yes. The sentence would be smoother with THAT.
Yes.

For example, the genocide in Darfur shows not only that history repeats itself when unacknowledged, but also that progress is at a standstill if we refuse to resolve our conflicts.
If you wished to you could say:
1) the genocide in Darfur shows that not only

or

2) the genocide in Darfur shows not only that h istory...

Sra
writeacher do i have to write two that can i just write one before the not only?
It's better with BOTH that Writeacher wrote.

Sra
Yes, for parallel construction purposes.

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm
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