This version is much better, but the final verdict should come from our expert SraJMcGin. I am not sure if cumpleanos is singular or plural (despite the "s") and whether "toma" is the right verb. It also means "to drink". Llevar might be better for what the limousine did. You are also mixing tenses, assuming Celebre' is preterite; "toma" is present.
I also believe "y diez amigos" should follow "me".
is this correct for what i did on my birthdaythe name of the restaurant is the IVY.
Celebre mis ultimos cumpleanos con una limusina que me toma y diez amigos a un restaurante el Ivy en Beverly Hills.
i am a straight a student only class i struggle in spanish
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Actually you don't need "mis cumpleaños" because "Mi cumpleaños" is sufficient. (My birthday rather than my birthdays) Again, learn how to do those accent marks! It is considered wrong if they are missing!
Celebré mi último cumpleaños con una limusina que me tomó/OR llevó con diez amigos al restaurante "el Ivy = La Hiedra" en Beverly Hills.
Sra
Celebré mi último cumpleaños con una limusina que me tomó/OR llevó con diez amigos al restaurante "el Ivy = La Hiedra" en Beverly Hills.
Sra
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