Asked by Amor

Is this a good thesis for my research paper.

Although gays are deprived of same-sex marriage, they are stripped of their respect,equal rights and financial security; therefore, the Federal government must pass a law allowing same-sex marriages
Answered by Writeacher
It seems as if you need a different word from "Although" -- it doesn't make sense as it is.
Answered by Amor
Thank you I will continue to work on thesis post my results later
Answered by Amor
Although gays are equal members of society, they are stripped of their respect,equal rights and financial security; therefore, the Federal government must pass a law allowing same-sex marriages
Answered by Amor
I have made changes to my thesis as follows:
Although gays are equal members of society, they are stripped of their respect,equal rights and financial security; therefore, the Federal government must pass a law allowing same-sex marriages

thank you in advance for your assistance
Answered by Amor
Guess no one agrees since no comment has been added
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