Is the commment placement correct in the first part of my resume?

OBJECTIVE
To attend an excellent college or university that will provide a challenging course of study in world cultures and languages, with a study abroad program to enrich my knowledge of the Spanish and Japanese languages.

Is this a resume for a job? Or is it for an application to college?

Application to college

Yes. After your name and address you can list your objectives. Check out these sites for tips on writing college application resumes.

http://www.smsd.org/schools/smwest/feature472.htm

http://www.satwords.com/members/resume_writing.htm