Is being overly skinny, not eating regularly or cosmetic surgery really appealing? Well, we're in a society where celebrities have taken over individuals' lives. That we as individuals don't have much pride in ourselves anymore . We have to put in our mind that plastic surgery won’t help you overcome your need it will trouble you a lot, you have to face major problems such as side effects. Cosmetic surgery is not bad, itself. We can’t deny that to enhance the appearance is the demand of people because everyone wants to be more better-looking in other eyes. This shows us that people have been influenced by the media and facts from researchers. The point here is the way you make it. If you take too much advantage of cosmetic surgery, it's really dangerous and you can face unexpected consequences. But then it's too late for you to regret. Donatella Versace is a typical example; she is a famous fashion designer. Her face changes drastically due to some unfortunate plastic surgery. So think carefully before you continue helping someone to change someone's appearance.

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