Many more words need deleting. Keep thinking.
PS -- Read it out loud to someone. You'll find more that way!
Instructions: Select the incorrect words in the paragraph.
I delete the words in capital
On the one of the hand, I have really enjoyed working with all of you in this department, but I came to realize I wasn't really happy in this type of work. In TO other than words, it just wasn't the right department for me. Most THAT importantly is , I HAS discovered my being social is a definite plus in the admissions departments, where I start next week. However, AND I do want to stress how much I have enjoyed working with all of you. Furthermore THAT , I hope to see you all now and then at school functions.
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