Hi, Henry,
I've been on a trip, and will be traveling again later this week.
1) Could help us find a school that is willing to join our partnership with both a French and a German school?
2) The project will involve high achievers belonging to current second classes of high school (age 17 or so) and will mainly concentrate on biodiversity in water and other waterways in our local areas.
"water and other waterways" seems redundant. Exactly what do you mean by "water" and how is it different from "other waterways"?
3) English has been chosen as lingua franca for the project.
This project has been thought of as a preparation for CLIL.
Does everyone know what CLIL stands for?
3) We are open to other interesting proposals from your school.
I'm pleased you are helping us again!
I need you to revise a few sentences on my project since I varied them a little.
Thank you very much for helping me again!
1) I wonder if you could help us find a school which is willing to join our partnership with both a French and a German school.
2) The project will involve high achievers belonging to current second classes of high school (aged 17) and will mainly concentrate on biodiversity in water and other waterways in our local areas.
3) English has been chosen as lingua franca for the project.
This project has been thought of as a preparation for CLIL.
3) We are open (??) to consider other interesting proposals from your side.
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1) Could you help us find a school that is willing to join our partnership with both a French and a German school?