Question

Ice cream/Melts because of hot temperature dripping down In a cone

How can i write this in a poem?

Answer 1

I have no idea how to do this please if you guys could help me out i would be really happy :-D

Answer 2

Ice cream
Melts
because of
hot temperature
dripping down
In a cone

Answer 3

Can you clarify what you have to do?

Answer 4

OK

yes writeacher is right

Answer 5

Example:
sky/rages because the clouds boil in a livid eruption strangling the rainbow

Poem:
As the sky rages,
The clouds boil over onto a sunless sky
Their roiling disturbs the universe.
They erupt with livid colors
Melting into the stars
And strangling the rainbow.

Answer 6

Ohhh you have to put other words in it

Answer 7

yes exactly

Answer 8

ice cream
melts from the sun's heat


ohhh man this is hard

Answer 9

I got this so far but i don't think it's right.Can you guys fix it

As the Ice cream melts,
The temperature on a sunny summer begins to rise
and disturbs the people.
It dripps down like butter.
The gravity force pulls it down
and all is left is a crunchy cone

Answer 10

that is perfect i would have never thought of that

Answer 11

Do you think so? I think something its missing but i don't know

Answer 12

maybe you should say a cruncy ice cream cone instead of cruncy cone

Answer 13

ok great any other ideas?

Answer 14

the gravity makes it drip down in a cone

Answer 15

thanks!! I will see what else can i do...

Answer 16

Sorry if I'm too late but when you say you are left with a crunchy cone you should change it to soggy because once the ice cream starts to melt your cone becomes soggy.