He/she not it.
2. film, either offered or gave. either actted or appeared
3. use of
4.& 5. what you have is fine.
6. were is correct
7. either
8. spelling errors
9. yes, either are correct
10.correct.
I still have a few doubts on the use of the word "narrator". Shall I refer to it as "it" or "he".
1)For example: "The narrator can be obtrusive, when he/it interferes in the narration giving his/its own points of view.
2)I added a few other sentences I'm doubtful about.
The film director (OR: Film director?) Stanley Kubrik offered (is "gave" possible) him the role of...
He acted/appeared/was (but not: did) in many films.
3) All (of) your questions lack either the subject or the auxiliary. Remember you can't ask any questions without including a subject.
4)He and his family moved to London. (better: he moved with his family to London).
5) Re-write all your questions correctly at least 5 times.
6) If I were (was is possible?) invited to a party, I would wear the new red dress my mum gave me for Christmas (or as a Christmas present).
7) What did you get from your mum for Christmas? What did your mother give you as a Christmas present?
(What is the best way of asking what I someone received for Christmas?)
8) On Epipany I stayed at home since I had a bad cold and a temperature. I made some buscuits and I filled the Christmas (?) stocking with them. Then 9) I hid it under my son's bed. On epiphany morning my child woke up and went in search of his stocking full of biscuits. (Can you also say: looked for his stocking?)
10)In Spain it is tradition to fill the stocking with every kind of sweets and let the children find it on Epiphany morning. Bad children receive only sweet coal (I don't know the name of it in English: it looks like a piece of coal but it is sweet and it can be red or black).
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I use "s/he" when gender is not determined. It's a little shorter.
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