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Please post your finished and proofread essay here and someone will probably critique it for you.
I need help with rewriting a theme essay. The structure for the theme essay is intro paragraph (thesis statement with topic) and three examples (body paragraphs) and a conclusion paragraph.
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Before you rewrite your essay, please read and follow the ideas here:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/editing.htm
In addition, once you think it's perfect, have someone read it OUT LOUD to you. You'll undoubtedly hear -- and therefore find and fix -- any errors still there. My recommendation is that you do the reading out loud at least once more -- and make further corrections.
As Ms. Sue wrote, you may post your finished essay if you'd like someone here to critique it for you.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/editing.htm
In addition, once you think it's perfect, have someone read it OUT LOUD to you. You'll undoubtedly hear -- and therefore find and fix -- any errors still there. My recommendation is that you do the reading out loud at least once more -- and make further corrections.
As Ms. Sue wrote, you may post your finished essay if you'd like someone here to critique it for you.
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