I need a full sentence outline on a thesis. The thesis is "Although children are taught the basics in school there needs to be more emphasis on the lower grades to be susre children who have difficulties are discovered early to get the help needed to stay with the class, and evaluations must be more specific in the areas a child needs help in.

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I need a full sentence outline on a thesis.  The thesis is "Although children are taught the basics in school there needs to be more emphasis on the lower grades to be susre children who have difficulties are discovered early to get the help needed to stay with the class, and evaluations must be more specific in the areas a child needs help in.

Writeacher · Answer

Please understand that no one here will do your work for you. However, we will be happy to read over whatever you come up with and make suggestions and/or corrections.

Please read through your thesis and correct any spelling/typo errors. It also contains too much information for one sentence. Get rid of its wordiness and rewrite.

Then list the specific details and ideas you plan to use to prove that your statement is true.

Please post what you think and write.

Ms. Sue · Answer

What are your thoughts about helping children in lower grades who are having trouble?

Anonymous · Answer

Although children are taught the basics in school there needs to be more emphasis on the lower grades. 1. Teaching styles for children with learning disabilities. 2. The neurologicl and psychological aspects. 3. The optical approach for teaching children how to read.