First start with the facts you've discovered that support your thesis. In what ways are these names, etc. offensive? What do these people think about these names? Why do people who approve these names do so?
It seems to me that those are the two major points for your outline. Instead of just phrases, all you need to do is to express your points in complete sentences in your outline.
We'll be glad to check your outline if you post it.
I am having a hard time finding a full-sentence outline for this can anyone help me?
What would a full-sentence outline be for this thesis? Native American Indian names, mascots and logos in all sports from elementary schools to professional teams can be offensive to some people not to others.
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Here is my outline can you tell me if it is any good?
I. Several organizations are say that using the Native American names and mascots are offensive, however, most Americans including American Indians believe that using Native American names and mascots are not offensive.
A. The names are not offensive
B. Using the tomahawk chop is very degrading.
C. By using mascots and logos are contributing to stereotypes.
I. Several organizations are say that using the Native American names and mascots are offensive, however, most Americans including American Indians believe that using Native American names and mascots are not offensive.
A. The names are not offensive
B. Using the tomahawk chop is very degrading.
C. By using mascots and logos are contributing to stereotypes.
That's just restating your thesis statement.
You could start your outline like this:
I. Thesis: Native American Indian names, mascots and logos in all sports from elementary schools to professional teams can be offensive to some people not to others.
II. Some people oppose using Native American names, mascots, and logos in sports.
. . . A. They feel it's degrading to Native Americans.
. . . . . .1.
. . . . . .2.
. . . B. Less objectionable names better represent these teams.
You could start your outline like this:
I. Thesis: Native American Indian names, mascots and logos in all sports from elementary schools to professional teams can be offensive to some people not to others.
II. Some people oppose using Native American names, mascots, and logos in sports.
. . . A. They feel it's degrading to Native Americans.
. . . . . .1.
. . . . . .2.
. . . B. Less objectionable names better represent these teams.
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