I left out the following sentences.

Please, could you check them too?

1) My backpack is very heavy because inside (in it? are both possible) there are extra clothes, food, water (or food and water) for two days, a map, and a compass.
2) I'll take a big backpack with a tent to sleep in.
I'm wearing a mimetic (??) T-shirt and a pullover (jumper) over it.
3) On my shoulders I'm carrying (not I'm wearing a bag with a compass, extra food and clothes.
4) How are you planning to organize the email partnership?

1 answer

1. "in" or "inside" are both fine.

2. mimetic???
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/mimetic

"pullover" (not "jumper")

3. Yes, "carrying" is correct.

4. OK
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