Please proofread your first two sentences.
Omit: eventually
Your attributions of father and son are fine.
I just need one more proofread.. My question is when two people have the same last name, how would you attribute them.. IE Tom and John Hoyer.. and if you see any other mistakes feel free to address by any means..
Hoyer died on at the Warner Barry Pavilion, a long-term care facility. He never recovered from the stroke he suffered just once week before winning the Democratic primary on March 21, 2006. He never made another public appearance. After he retired, Democratic Party leaders eventually picked his son, Tom Hoyer, to replace him on the ballot.
“He dedicated his life to his family and gave generously of himself as an elected official,” said Tom, Hoyer’s son and elected successor. “His love for this county knew no bounds, and he will be deeply missed.”
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Thank you Ms. Sue for all your help.. silly mistakes.. hehe
You're welcome, Blaze. :-)
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