Question

I have to write a triolet.Would you proof read this one for me?

Title: My Mother

My mother always wiped away all my tears
God must have sent this woman from above
When I cried she had a listening ear
She took away all my worries and fears
My mother always wiped away all my tears
There was no doubt of my mother’s love
My mother always wiped all my tears
God must have sent his woman from above

Answer 1

Line 7 needs to be identical to lines 1 and 4.

http://www.baymoon.com/~ariadne/form/triolet.htm
Scroll down to Form and make sure everything matches the directions. (For example, line 8 needs to exactly match line 2.)

Answer 2

Very close! Usually the first, fourth and seventh lines are identical. These are very close.

Check the rhyme scheme: ABaAabAB

Sra

Answer 3

Is this better. (Triolet)? Does it make sense?


My Mother

My mother always wiped away all my tears
God must have sent this woman from above
When I cried she had a listening ear
My mother always wiped away all my tears
She took away all my worries and fears
There was no doubt of my mother’s love
My mother always wiped away all my tears
God must have sent his woman from above

Answer 4

A lot closer!

Sra

Answer 5

What's that 5th word in the last line?