I have to create a piece of descriptive writing about a good day at a beach, but I am unsure on how to describe the atmosphere of the beach. Please help! Here is what I have so far:
It's the morning of somerset beach. Seagulls haver over waiting for food, whilst the sun slowly rises. The sun is the boss, it thinks like one too! It sets the mood of the day as its luminous, bright rays, slowly rise, hitting the surface of the sapohire sea. Every so often, gentle, whooshing waves fade in and out, like a violin relaxing your mind. A soft breeze tickles you, making you feel calm and relaxed. But this is all disrupted with the arrival of families. It all soon gets too chaotic as children are eager to get out of the car. Mothers distressed...
For me, what I have so far, is a but boring and dull. I'm finding it difficult to add personification and metaphors. Can you please help me with the starting of the paragraph?
Thank you