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In the story “Only Goodness”, Rahul’s mother is characterized by her blindness in which of parental behavior plays a big role in their children. Eventually, an act that in one way or another would end up being a dissatisfying one. ‘“Can you talk to him” her mother asked Sudha. “Find out what went wrong?”” (Lahiri 139-140). The lines above, illustrates a type of mother who’s not willing to confront her own son and instead she asks her older daughter to do it. It is at that time or even before when the mother-children relationship appears to be dysfunctional. Furthermore, the mother’s lack of trust in her own daughter, Sudha, when stating “I think Rahul might have a drinking problem” (Lahiri 143). As a mother, at least for once realize that her children are going through some tough time, especially her son.
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Eventually, an act that in one way or another would end up being a dissatisfying one. -- is not a sentence.
The lines above, illustrates -- watch subject/verb agreement. Why is that comma there>
Furthermore, the mother’s lack of trust in her own daughter, Sudha, when stating “I think Rahul might have a drinking problem” (Lahiri 143). -- who says it? Sudha or the mother?