What you've written is not a thesis statement. It's simply a very brief summary of the story.
Go through ALL of the examples here:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
Notice that the first in each pair is NOT a thesis statement; the second one IS an acceptable thesis statement.
Please try again.
I did help with my thesis statement? I writing an essay from the play trifles by susan Glaspell.
Thesis: Minnie Wright loses her mind which relates to isolation,the gender differneces and the canary death.
I need a very strong thesis
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okay is this a better thesis?
Minnie Wright’s insanity relates to isolation, unhappy marriage and the gender difference all causes her to the murder of her husband.
Minnie Wright’s insanity relates to isolation, unhappy marriage and the gender difference all causes her to the murder of her husband.
That is not a sentence. Look at this. Minnie Wright's insanity, caused by isolation, an unhappy marriage and gender differences, relate to the murdering of her husband.
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