Question

I did help with my thesis statement? I writing an essay from the play trifles by susan Glaspell.
Thesis: Minnie Wright loses her mind which relates to isolation,the gender differneces and the canary death.

I need a very strong thesis

Answer 1

What you've written is not a thesis statement. It's simply a very brief summary of the story.

Go through ALL of the examples here:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

Notice that the first in each pair is NOT a thesis statement; the second one IS an acceptable thesis statement.

Please try again.

Answer 2

okay is this a better thesis?
Minnie Wright’s insanity relates to isolation, unhappy marriage and the gender difference all causes her to the murder of her husband.

Answer 3

That is not a sentence. Look at this. Minnie Wright's insanity, caused by isolation, an unhappy marriage and gender differences, relate to the murdering of her husband.