I am writing an essay on Russia and Western Europe and I am comparing the two. I am talking about their economic, social, military and economic differences and similarities. Does anyone have any tips on how to make my paragraphs flow if im talking about such different things?
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I would talk about how Russia was a Communist State and how the Russian leaders controled everything. But first are you talking about current day stuff or back in history?
When you're writing about a complex subject like this, you'll need to pay attention to
~~ structure
and
~~ cohesion
It seems to me that you're writing a sort of DEFINITION ESSAY as well as a COMPARISON/CONTRAST ESSAY, right?
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/definition.html
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/definition.htm
http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/comparison_contrast.html
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/comparison.htm
And these will help you with COHESION (or how to make it all "stick together" smoothly):
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/style/cohesion.html
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/transitions.htm
~~ structure
and
~~ cohesion
It seems to me that you're writing a sort of DEFINITION ESSAY as well as a COMPARISON/CONTRAST ESSAY, right?
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/definition.html
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/definition.htm
http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/comparison_contrast.html
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/comparison.htm
And these will help you with COHESION (or how to make it all "stick together" smoothly):
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/style/cohesion.html
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/transitions.htm