As I asked you last night --
What is the topic of your essay?
What is your thesis sentence?
After you answer those questions, I'll try to help you write it without using personal pronouns.
I am writing a formal essay for a contest to win a scholarship.But it has to be written formally.
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This site gives you the essentials for writing formal essays. It will give you an explanation and example of each part.
http://www.apurnell.com/cs1readings/ElementsAndStructure.htm
http://www.apurnell.com/cs1readings/ElementsAndStructure.htm
Can You Give Me a example of A Expository essay on Healthy eating