I am trying to come up with a thesis for my english paper. It is going to be on Social class in Katherine Mansfields The Garden Party and A Cup of Tea. I want to show how both the upper class main characters take particular interest in the lower class characters. I came up with the one below if you could think of anymore that better relates to what I'm trying to do that would be very helpful.

Question

Potential Thesis: In Katherine Mansfield’s short stories The Garden Party and A Cup of Tea, she uses the upper classes disillusionment of reality to show the rigid social structure beneath.

Answer 1

Also the upper class romanticises the lower class and lives in a "fake" reality

Answer 2

Which thesis are you going to concentrate on?

Answer 3

What do you mean? The last thing I added was just a note on what the social class during the 1900's (when the short stories were set) in Europe was like.

Answer 4

OK. See my later response.