how would you start off an essay that is about the lack of privacy you have? (has to be in first person)

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I'd start by writing a draft thesis sentence.

The second step is to write an outline of the arguments that support the thesis.

Third, I'd write the body of the paper.

My fourth step is to write the introduction which includes the "grabber sentence" and the thesis statement.

Remember, you can't introduce something unless you know what it's about.
the essay is about someone who has no privacy and the thesis statement is something like "i wish people respected my privacy." i don't really know how to start off my introductory paragraph.
Please post your outline supporting your thesis statement.
This site may help you develop your thesis statement.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
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