How can I make this sentence better? or is it ok?
The group offers organizations and companies access to their network of volunteers, resources to create any community-focused promotional event, and cause marketing strategies.
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The sentence structure is okay, but I'm not sure what "cause marketing strategies" are. What is "cause marketing?"
Actually, I would write this as two sentences:
The group offers organizations and companies access to their network of volunteers. They also offer resources to create any community-focused promotional event and can help with marketing strategies.
The group offers organizations and companies access to their network of volunteers. They also offer resources to create any community-focused promotional event and can help with marketing strategies.
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