Hi, this the description paper I posted before except I changed it. I have to redo it. I took you guy's advice please check and correct me. Thanks.
By the door, there paused an impatient low spirited woman. She was in her twenties and she had big, bright brown eyes along with long dark hair. She continued to pause at the door, her heart throbbing and her throat bloating like a balloon filled up with water that is one poke away from its water to gush out. While her face is frozen with fear;she sweeps mutely and wants secretly to free herself from what is standing in front of her as she feels caged like battered beast.
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Is this supposed to be an anecdote from your experience?
No. I have to describe a person that is afraid. Thank
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