Hi,

I have started working on the Phone Book Character essay again. i did the drafting sheet just now. I will try to do as much of the essay as i can, while ofcourse still asking questions from you guys when i need help, but mostly i want to do it on my own. as soon as i finish, there is a revision sheet that has to be completed by an adult. by looking at the comments on the revision sheet i have to improve my essay and write the final draft. It would be great help if one of the tutors could fill out the revision sheet for me. If anybody is ready to do it, please let me know. thanks guys!

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I will if no one else does.

ok thank you so much