I can't tell which are the original sentences and which are your corrections.
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Here are my paralle structure sentences:
The dog had to choose between jumping over the fence and digging a hole underneath it.
She disliked going to the beach and hiking in the woods, and she did not care for picnics, either.
As I look down the city street, I see the soft lights from restaurant windows, and I hear the mellow sounds of a nightclub band and the carefree moods of people walking by.
The singers have been on several road tours, have recorded for two record companies, and would like to make a movie someday.
They would rather order pizza than eat their sister's cooking.
I explained to the teacher that my car had broken down, my books had been stolen, and I had no assignment pad.
That night the prisoner was sick, discouraged, and filled with loneliness.
As the truck rumbled down the street, it suddenly lurched out of control, smashing into a parked car and hitting the storefront of my uncle's hardwood store.
The teacher is patient, is intelligent, and demands a lot.
He was determined to pass the math course, to get not only his three credits but also a sense of achievement.
Here are the ones that I corrected are these correct:
The dog had to choose jumping over the fence or to dig a hole underneath it.
She disliked hiking in the woods, picnicking, and going to the beach.
As I look down the city street, I see the soft lights from restaurant windows, hear the mellow sounds from a nightclub band, carefree moods of people walking by.
The singers have been on several road tours, recorded for two record companies, and would like to make a movie someday.
They would rather order pizza than eat their sister's cooking.
I explained to the teacher that my car had broken down, books were stolen, and I had no assignment pad.
That night the prisoner was sick, discouraged ,and filled with loneliness.
As the truck rumbled down the street, it suddenly lurched out of control, smashing into a parked car and hitting the storefront of my uncle's hardwood store.
The teacher is patient, intelligent, and demands a lot.
He was determined to pass the math course, get his three credits, also a sense of achievement.
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