Help me write this in a proper English “ I texted him I think it was 17:00 telling him that I’m going to Mosville festival the guy denied so bad i then told him I won't go anywhere he then texted my brother telling him that he’s coming to Monsterlus and he should not tell me that his coming in order for me not to go to the event, you know siblings my brother sent me some screenshots with him like the guy drove all the way from Middleburg to Monsterlus wanting to stop me from not going there”

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Help me write this in a proper English “  I texted him I think it was 17:00 telling him that I’m going to Mosville festival the guy denied so bad i then told him I won't go anywhere he then texted my brother telling him that he’s coming to Monsterlus and he should not tell me that his coming in order for me not to go to the event, you know siblings my brother sent me some screenshots with him like the guy drove all the way from Middleburg to Monsterlus wanting to stop me from not going there”

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Sure! Here’s a revised version of your message:

"I texted him around 5:00 PM to let him know that I was going to the Mosville festival. He strongly denied it. I then told him I wouldn’t be going anywhere. After that, he texted my brother, saying he was coming to Monsterlus and asked him not to tell me about his plans to prevent me from going to the event. You know how siblings are—my brother sent me some screenshots of their conversation. It turns out that this guy drove all the way from Middleburg to Monsterlus just to try to stop me from attending!"