fix this email to my 8th rade teacher

Question

Hope you're doing great and having a good afternoon today! I am applying to Wallnut hill high school for the arts  and need a recommedation letter from a teacher. I am wondering if you could write me a recommendation letter if that is okay with you. 

Answer 1

Subject: Request for Recommendation Letter

Dear [Teacher’s Name],

I hope you're having a wonderful afternoon!

I am currently applying to Walnut Hill High School for the Arts and would be honored if you could write a recommendation letter for me. Your support would mean a lot, and I believe your insights would help convey my passion and readiness for this opportunity.

Please let me know if you would be willing to help. I truly appreciate it!

Thank you so much!

Best regards,
[Your Name]
[Your Contact Information]

Answer 2

fix the ending and make it sound more stardard

Answer 3

Subject: Request for Recommendation Letter

Dear [Teacher’s Name],

I hope you're having a wonderful afternoon!

I am currently applying to Walnut Hill High School for the Arts and would be honored if you could write a recommendation letter for me. Your support would mean a lot, and I believe your insights would help convey my passion and readiness for this opportunity.

If you are willing to assist me with this, I would greatly appreciate it. Please let me know if you need any additional information or if there's anything I can provide to make this easier.

Thank you very much for your consideration.

Sincerely,
[Your Name]
[Your Contact Information]