Editing grammar.

Review of the sleep questionnaire indicates that the patient had a Trend Oximetry done 2 years ago, and was placed on 9 cm of sea pap. The patient notes that he has not seen much change with the use of it. His Father has a history of the same. He still continues to have day-time fatigue and sleepiness and some shortness of breath. There is also a history of seizure disorder diagnosed in the Fall of 1997.

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Review of the sleep questionnaire indicates that the patient had a trend oximetry done 2 years ago, and was placed on 9 cm of Sea-PAP. The patient notes, that he has not seen much change with the use of it. His Father has a history of the same. He still continues to have day time fatigue, and sleepiness, and some shortness of breath. There is also a history of seizure disorder diagnosed in the fall of 1997.

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Review of the sleep questionnaire indicates that the patient had a trend oximetry done two (2) years ago (comma deleted) and was placed on 9 cm of Sea-PAP. The patient notes (comma deleted) that he has not seen much change with the use of it. His father has a history of the same. He still continues to have daytime fatigue, ("and" deleted)sleepiness, and some shortness of breath. There is also a history of seizure disorder diagnosed in the fall of 1997.
LOL I can't believe I missed father being capitalized. Thank you writeacher.
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Carina was inspected at that time, which appeared sharp with no mucosal lesions noted. 2% Lidocaine was instilled over the carina. Right main stem bronchus was inspected next. Opening to the right upper lobe was inspected, however 2 areas of abnormality were detected. All 3 anterior, posterior, and apical, segments were visualized without any obstruction noted.