does this sound write and look grammatically correct? Please and thank you

Odysseus the Curious took us inside a cave to eat. After we ate some cheeses the ugly Cyclops came along with his flock of sheep and rams. He put a gigantic boulder to block the exit of the cave. The whole crew was scared because we were stuck with a man-eating “thing.”

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"cheese" not "cheeses"!

comma after "cheese"

Use "moved" rather than "put"

Everything else sounds fine.

thanks

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