Does this sentence make sense?
My backyard is a haven of peace.
Or, My backyard is a haven of peace for me.
Which one should I use for my observational essay?
Thanks
-MC
3 answers
I would use "seems" as opposed to "is". Other than that, the sentence is great.
So..my backyard seems as a haven of peace to me?
-MC
-MC
My backyard seems a peaceful haven to me. <G>