Please clarify: Who are THEY?
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Do you feel that as long as they continue to stay healthy that this will have an effect on their mental state? If not, then explain why.
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no ofcoarse not their mental state might deteriorate if something bad happens around them like a death and if something good happens like a promotion their mental state will increase
Not only who are "they", but what is "this"? Pronouns need clear referents.