Dear Hiring Manager,
I am writing to express my interest in the summer custodian position at your amusement park, as advertised on the Internet. Given my passion for amusement parks and my availability during the summer, I believe I would excel in this role. I possess a cheerful and enthusiastic demeanor, attributes that I believe would contribute greatly to creating a positive experience for park visitors. Moreover, I am motivated to work in order to save funds for the acquisition of a new game system. I have attached my resume for your review and would sincerely appreciate the opportunity to discuss further details at your convenience.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Guy, I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email. Sincerely, Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
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