Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job advertisement online and I am eager to submit my application. I believe I would be an excellent fit for the position of summer custodian due to my enthusiasm for amusement parks and my availability during the summer months. With no school commitments, I possess the flexibility necessary to commit to this role. I understand that the responsibilities associated with this position may be straightforward, and I am confident in my ability to succeed in the role. Moreover, the potential to earn income for acquiring a new gaming console greatly motivates me. I have attached my résumé for your reference. Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to the opportunity to contribute to your team.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardner
Dear hiring guy,
I saw your job on the Internet and I’d like to apply. I’d make a great summer custodian because I love amusement parks. I don’t have school in the summer and I’m a really fun happy guy. The job sounds really easy so I’m sure I’ll be fine besides, I’d like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you’re ready for me to start work. I’ve included my résumé with this email. Sincerely, Kurt Gardner.
In five sentences, rewrite Kurtz cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
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