Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across the job posting for the summer custodian position and I am writing to express my interest in applying. I believe I would be an excellent fit for this role due to my enthusiasm for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months, and my positive and approachable demeanor. I am confident that I can excel in this position as it appears to be well-suited to my abilities. Moreover, I am motivated to obtain employment in order to save money towards the purchase of a new gaming system. I would be grateful for the opportunity to further discuss my qualifications for this position. Thank you for considering my application and I look forward to your response.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
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