Could you please check these sentences, especially the use of sentence connectors? Thank you very much.
1) The lecturer is telling her students about using bamboo fabric for clothing/in the fashion industry.
Whereas cotton has long, flat fibres, bamboo fibre has a round surface which makes it soft and smooth (to the touch).
2) To her mind touching bamboo fibre is very similar to touching silk rather than cashmere, which she finds itchy to wear under the skin.
3) Bamboo compares with petrol-based synthetic fibres favourably, too. Synthetic materials are unpopular for two main reasons.
4) First, they can cause skin irritation or even a rush. Secondly, they can give off a bad smell quite quickly.
5) As a matter of fact, they fail to wick moisture away from your body. This can be a drawback not so much to the wearer but as to those around him or her.
6) In contrast, if you wear bamboo, the natural properties of the plant will help keep you naturally dry.
7) Actually, it is three, four times more absorbent than cotton. Furthermore, bamboo clothing (clothes) are strong and durable and stand up to years and years of wear. You can wash bamboo clothes 50 times without them losing their natural properties.
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4) rush = rash
7) without THEM losing = without THEIR losing (gerund)
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