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Compare and contrast Queen Eleanor's and Louis' relationships with the church.
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Both Eleanor and Louis were to closely related for the church to tolerate
King Louis was more connected to the church as he couldn't bear being excommunicated and killing so many people therefore he fell into a spiritual crisis. However Eleanor was not as connected to the church as when she found out that her husband was excommunicated she found it normal as both of father and grandfather was and they ignored it.
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elenor is fancy and luis isn't