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Personal narrative writing rubric:

1. Organization: has a clear beginning, middle and end. ( 4 points)

2. Content: the narrative makes sense and has details to help the reader imagine what is being described. ( 4 points)

3. Conventions: there is adequate use of correct punctuation (including commas, quotation marks and periods), correct capitalization, correct grammar, and correct spelling. ( 4 points)

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Prompt: A Day That Changed My Life


A Day That Changed My Life

Introduction
It was a bright, sunny morning on June 15, 2020, a day that started like any other but ended up changing the course of my life forever. As I walked to the bus stop, the vibrant flowers blooming along the sidewalk seemed to mirror the excitement bubbling inside me. Little did I know that this day would unfold dramatically and teach me lessons I never expected to learn.


Beginning
The day began with the anticipation of my high school graduation. I had spent years working hard for this moment, balancing studies, extracurricular activities, and part-time jobs. The ceremony was scheduled for the afternoon, but the morning was dedicated to last-minute preparations, such as organizing my cap and gown, and double-checking the details with my friends.

When I arrived at school, I encountered a flurry of buzzing excitement among my classmates. We were all in a euphoric state, taking selfies, laughing, and exchanging heartfelt notes. The atmosphere was electric, filled with both joy and a hint of bittersweet nostalgia as we realized that our time together was coming to an end.


Middle
After a brief rehearsal, it was finally time for the ceremony. As I stepped onto the platform to receive my diploma, the cheers of family and friends echoed in my ears. Holding that rolled-up piece of parchment symbolized years of hard work, determination, and resilience. At that moment, I felt invincible, as if I could conquer the world.

However, just as the ceremony was concluding, my world shifted dramatically. I received a phone call from my father, his voice shaky and urgent. He told me that my younger sister, Lily, had been in a serious accident while riding her bike. My heart sank as I listened to the words that felt surreal. He advised me to meet him at the hospital immediately.

As I rushed to the hospital, every second felt like an eternity. I struggled to hold back tears, my mind racing with thoughts of Lily. What if she was seriously injured? Would she be okay? I tried to focus on my breathing, to calm the chaos brewing inside of me.


End
Hours later, I anxiously sat in the waiting room, surrounded by sterile white walls and the faint beeping of machines. My father arrived, eyes red from worry, and when we were finally allowed to see Lily, a wave of relief washed over me. Although she had minor injuries, she was awake and alert, smiling at us as if to reassure us that she would be okay.

That night, as I sat by her bedside, I reflected on how quickly life could change. I realized that high school was just one chapter in my life; there were countless experiences still to come, both joyous and challenging. I vowed to cherish every moment, to embrace life’s unpredictability, and to always prioritize my family.

As I walked away from the hospital the next morning, I felt a newfound sense of purpose. The day of my graduation had become a day of awakening, shifting my perspective on what truly mattered. Graduating was an accomplishment, but the love for my sister and the bond of family were the lessons that would guide me forward.


In retrospect, that June day was not just the ending of one chapter in my life, but the beginning of a more profound journey of love, resilience, and cherishing every moment—a day that truly changed my life forever.

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