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Review of the sleep questionnaire indicates that the patient had a trend oximetry done 2 years ago and was placed on 9 cm of CPAP. The patient notes that he has not seen much change with the use of it. His father has a history of the same. He still continues to have daytime fatigue and sleepiness and some shortness of breath. There is also a history of seizure disorder diagnosed in the fall of 1997.

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...He still continues to have daytime fatigue, sleepiness and some...

just separate with a comma

the rest I fine :)
Commas needed:

He still continues to have daytime fatigue, sleepiness, and some shortness of breath. There is also a history of seizure disorder, diagnosed in the fall of 1997.

Here's a good source for basic comma uses you need to know:
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