Can you check these sentences for me, please? Thank you.

Question

1) The girl in the right margin of the text is wearing a light blue plaited mini-skirt over a pair of grey leggings. She is also wearing a pink sleeveless top over a purple vest and pink trainers.The trainers match the top.
2) She has a string of pearls with a horseshoe pendant on. She is also wearing (synonym) two bracelets on her right forearm.
3) She has a light blue hairband on her head. She's got long, blonde, shoulder-length hair, a fair complexion, thin eyebrows and long eyelashes.
4) Her hands are manicured (or she has nail varnish on her nails

Answer 1

1. The girl is in the text?? Or do you mean the girl pictured in the text? The rest is fine except you need a space before the third sentence.

2. delete "on" at the end of the first sentence; use "She also has" instead of "She is also wearing"

3. comma after "eyebrows"

4. period after "manicured" and delete the rest.

Answer 2

2. OR = She has on a string.....
wearing = has on, displaying

4. nail polish (rather than varnish)

Sra

Answer 3

Can you help me proofread the following paragraph and find nine misspelled or misused words and write them correctly?

Planting a vegetable garden is a popular American hobby. It’s not ready that difficult. A gardening magazine or book can help you get started. Your plants will need a lot of sunshine. Weeding will help prevent disease. The most popular home gardens are beans, lettuce, radish, onions and tomatoes.

Answer 4

Lisa: ready = realy

Perhaps the last sentence would read better as: The most popular home gardens contain beans, etc.

Sra